Comments

Hey Madison, I loved your story. The line "A house that was filled with love, and happiness, the only thing to show for it now is a pile of black charred remains." really stuck out to me as well as the very last line of your piece. Your story really kept my attention. Keep writing, you are good at it.

Hey Georgia, I really liked your story. It reminded me of the stuffed animal I carried around with me as a child. It was a worm I got when I was three, and I became so obsessed with it my parents gave it to my dad to put it in a box when I was Eight. I only got to see it on weekend visits, and to this day it remains in that box.

Hey Chad! I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the perspective in your story, as well as the story itself. The line One piercing "“SNAP” quickly made me realize that the place in the universe is the ground, as I toppled to the frostbitten Earth." really stuck out to me. You ended it really nicely too, it wasn't abrupt. Thank you.